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Nunam's avatar

Ahhhhh.....so beautiful, i love the metaphors and sensuality this poem have ....and the last line is cherry on the top🩵

Genevieve's avatar

This is beautiful 😘

Azure Jo Storm's avatar

This is stunning work here. My favorite stanza has to be this one:

"its hue a deep

truth

its stunning dim

wind"

You're figurative language is exceptional, thank you so much for sharing.

Tales by favee ✨💗's avatar

This is sooooooooo beautiful ✨

the honest creator's avatar

It's really amazing personally I like way of writing ♥️

Love from india

Asima Firdous's avatar

Wow this is so fabulous!! I love the way you've resonated this poem so beautifully🤌🏻

Monique's avatar

Beautiful and delicate poem ✨️❤️

mariamsvoicenotes's avatar

gorg🥹

Nyki Saedr's avatar

This is stunning ✨✨

swedendrift | writer's avatar

like a painting made with words

《嘉》's avatar

sooo beautiful!

Marie Miru's avatar

💗💗💗

LettersfromTulip's avatar

beautifully written💕

mel ୨୧⋆.˚'s avatar

the line “cast me into my lover’s dream” is so so beautiful 🤍 and the whole poem has such depth! love it x

Jennifer Heinen's avatar

Once again so damn powerful!