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Danish- دانش's avatar

Amazing

Ovy's avatar

Really beautiful. Caught myself smiling at the end. "Good morning becomes the garden bloom" felt relaxing and a befitting end. Thanks for sharing

robenia's avatar

Lovely. I’m glad it evoked such a positive response for you. Thank you.

VedJournal ✍️📜's avatar

Great

VedJournal ✍️📜's avatar

Wonderful Poem

MissLissaWrites ❤'s avatar

Truly beautiful

Jordan Marie's avatar

so moving and rhythmic to read

Ankit Kumar's avatar

Good written, i feel carried by it - freedom and sadness mix, soft and passing, but staying with me.

hers, still's avatar

I love it !!

Lena adores's avatar

Beautiful

MG's avatar

Absolutely haunting. Life and nature continue on despite grief. Time does not halt for it. Beautifully written.

Maria Grace's avatar

This reads like motion inside grief, like the body keeps going even when something underneath is still turning. “the silent gear of grief’s beast” really lingered with me. Beautiful and haunting. Im so impressed!

robenia's avatar

Wow. Perfectly said.

Jae ꩜'s avatar

Really lovely :)

Spinelli's avatar

Robenia, your style is so unique and soothing! <3

robenia's avatar

Thank you so much.

Sofia C Sousa's avatar

Hi Robenia, this is beautiful, it flows like a river! 🩷

robenia's avatar

Thank you Sofia.

Heart to Words7's avatar

Beautiful!!

Azure Jo Storm's avatar

This is art 💙