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Wadzanai A's avatar

Loved this and savoured every sentence!

paracrom's avatar

oooh. i really enjoyed this! your prose really pulled me in

Yoyo's avatar

EEAAO is actually my favorite movie, this was a lovely read

Inga Jones Writes Thrillers's avatar

I really enjoyed the prose here. You're very good at creating a setting that enriches the story.

The Other Ending's avatar

There’s a tenderness in how panic, time, and memory bleed into each other here. I felt this more than I understood it, and that feels right

robenia's avatar

Thank you for reading. That's exactly what I was hoping for. The feeling first, the understanding after.

notes for an inner kid's avatar

this piece is soooo beautifully written!!! keep up that great work baee!! <33🥰💕

I'll be here rooting for u!!🥹

robenia's avatar

Thank you!