Omg!! Starting got me Hooked!! And somehow I just feel that the ending line is a rhetorical question! 'Why is my spirit upset?' and that's when you've either drunken too much of this inconsumable intoxicating drink— life or you've bled to the point that you are hoping for answers before SUNRISE, before all that blood dries and leaves a permanent mark of your sadness! 🤩 I hope my interpretation makes sense lol😭
Yes it makes sense. Thank you for your interpretation. Its thoughtful. I wrote this while I was drifting off to sleep, so you're correct about that point.
this poem here is very absorbing yet quiet, and you can feel the spirituality in it (in my opinion)
it seems that your soul has been awake for ages trying to sleep for so long, but the moment you do, your gives you backlash with anger, not letting you sleep.
I must say this is amazing. I could feel the unaligned while reading. Felt as though I’ve met a soul whom lost themselves in the thick fog casted into our lives
“But I am not dead
So I know
it’s worse than I fear
Because its more than I know”
That’s the kind of line that sticks with you! I love your poem!
this is how you begin a poem!! im obsessed with the imagery here, the metaphors work so well. amazing poem, truly beautiful in a melancholic way
Omg!! Starting got me Hooked!! And somehow I just feel that the ending line is a rhetorical question! 'Why is my spirit upset?' and that's when you've either drunken too much of this inconsumable intoxicating drink— life or you've bled to the point that you are hoping for answers before SUNRISE, before all that blood dries and leaves a permanent mark of your sadness! 🤩 I hope my interpretation makes sense lol😭
Yes it makes sense. Thank you for your interpretation. Its thoughtful. I wrote this while I was drifting off to sleep, so you're correct about that point.
“Why is my spirit upset” is too relatable. I loved your description and visualization of emotions ✨
I like this so much🌠 Hope we will hear you in upcoming pieces reading your poetry🥹
Coming soon!
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Wow I really love the imaginary and your way of writing. I haven’t came across this way of delivering poems and It’s AMAZING!
amazing 🫶🏻
Heartfelt and beautiful. Those questions we ask on a sleepless night, searching for answers in the quiet dark.
Just checked this poem out.
this poem here is very absorbing yet quiet, and you can feel the spirituality in it (in my opinion)
it seems that your soul has been awake for ages trying to sleep for so long, but the moment you do, your gives you backlash with anger, not letting you sleep.
powerful.
This is really incredible! You have a gift of being so magnetic with the way you deliver your poetry ❤️✨️
I must say this is amazing. I could feel the unaligned while reading. Felt as though I’ve met a soul whom lost themselves in the thick fog casted into our lives
Love it!
I loved how it was being read in my head, now I need someone to read it out loud to me!! Loved💕💕💕
Coming soon! Thank you for reading.
Absolutely lovely and captivating! You are a great poet; sis. Keep it up!👍😊👏👏👏