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Kim Williams, M.Div.'s avatar

My favorite lines:

"as I lay, I forget to

lie awake

and I begin to

feel for a

different dream"

This has my mind dancing in stanzas and metaphors.

Marlana aka Outtamydamnmind's avatar

This has a quiet, meditative feeling to it. The tension between what we hope for and what actually grows kept echoing for me as I read through it. It feels like a kind of inward listening like the poem is slowly peeling back layers until it reaches that “different stream” at the end.✨

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