This was such a beautiful read. Your words felt both intimate and expansive at the same time. I found myself slowing down and rereading certain lines just to sit with them a little longer. Thank you for sharing this. ❤️✨️
I had to read this a few times to get my head around the feelings this piece evoked in me. And it settled as feeling like the tension between honesty and performance. I also felt a core rootedness that is also guarded, protective.
These are themes I circle frequently (including today), so that may be my own projection. But I love when a piece makes me slow down and name what I’m feeling. This one did that beautifully.
Thank you for sharing it with me. I enjoyed it very much. 🤍
My favorite lines:
"as I lay, I forget to
lie awake
and I begin to
feel for a
different dream"
This has my mind dancing in stanzas and metaphors.
Omg. Yes. Exactly ❤️✌🏻
"Feel for a different dream"...this actually explains at this new years beginning. No coincidence
The fruitful sound forever unknown 🥹❤️
You write so good. 🥲
I had to again and again before the wind began to blow some meaning my way.
And, yeah, once I began to grasp it, I can't look at this precious piece the same again. 💙
Beautiful ebb and tide, love the theme of finding self here!
This was such a beautiful read. Your words felt both intimate and expansive at the same time. I found myself slowing down and rereading certain lines just to sit with them a little longer. Thank you for sharing this. ❤️✨️
“begin to
feel for a
different stream
for I've begun
to meet
my inner being
and hear
ebb tide”
I call her Lucy 🫶
I love how Part II shifts inward.
“as I lay, I forget to lie awake” feels like the moment the mind loosens its grip and something truer slips in.
I love this.
beautiful poem!!
I had to read this a few times to get my head around the feelings this piece evoked in me. And it settled as feeling like the tension between honesty and performance. I also felt a core rootedness that is also guarded, protective.
These are themes I circle frequently (including today), so that may be my own projection. But I love when a piece makes me slow down and name what I’m feeling. This one did that beautifully.
Thank you for sharing it with me. I enjoyed it very much. 🤍
I begin to feel for a different dream... nice lines
I love this. The rhythmic pace of it coupled with the imagery is entrancing ❤️✌🏻
Wow the flow of your work is absolutely stunning 😍
beautiful <3
This is so so beautiful.
“yet a leaf takes
leave
back home to its earthly
being”
I really love this. Thank you for sharing.